Kiana-I REALLY enjoyed your story because I really felt like I was in the head of your character. I also liked how you used the word "cool" a lot to really show how important it is to the story. Some of the lines were funny and I liked it a great deal! -Juju
Michelle- I liked your story a lot and I liked how you gave your character a mysterious personality because I noticed that not many stories had that so I liked that. I also liked how you ended the story with a cliff-hanger type thing. Good work!- Juliette
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