HW 19

Yurelis-
POV:4
Evid:3.5
Significance:3.5
Con:2
Opp. View:4
Com:2.5
Total:19.5

Kiana-
your paper was really really good. It was very strong and I liked how you used a lot of statistics and information from the internet to back up your statements. You were very thorough with everything and you hardly left anything out. I also enjoyed how you used some of your own personal statements also so you didn't only use information ot=r facts. Using personal examples is very good in my opinion because it shows your own experiences and not just something an author wrote about in a newspaper. You also cited sources which is good. I also found it was good that you titled each paragraph with the heading like 3rd argument, significance, etc. because it is easy to follow that way and everything isn't just jumbled together. You could adfd like one or two ideas from movies or songs to make your arguments even stronger. GOOD WORK THOUGH!